Ladies and Gentlemen of the jury, I wish for the prosecution of Mr.Hyde. A man whom is believed to be guilty of the murder of a member of the parliament and a fine man, Sir Danvers Carew. A woman had watched Mr. Hyde murder Sir.Carew with a cane which is fatal. I believe that no sane man would commit this horrendous crime or would be allowed to live. Even though Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde are the same person, Dr. Jekyll is no longer able to control Mr. Hyde's impulse's as well as his actions therefore, no man or lady maybe safe anymore. This man has committed several crimes before but this is his most violent one. One previous crime that he had committed was that he trampled over a little girl and carelessly walked away until a kind hearted man pulled him by the collar to bring him to the little girl's family to apologize and pay for his injuries. If his evil nature is practiced much further, I pity the person that crosses his path for he may be murdered. Mr. Hyde is no longer safe for us to have him living among us and this is my input on this case.
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ReplyDeleteYou have a good feel for the proper point of view for this assignment. You have chosen to write from the perspective of the prosecutor in this case. Your introduction has the basics: it introduces your position in the case and briefly introduces the case, the accused, and the victim. Remember in order to be truly convincing, you need to use language that is powerful and moving. As with any other writing you should have a separate introduction, middle, and closing paragraph. Each middle paragraph should have its own distinct topic. You might divide it up based on topics such as: evidence, witnesses, and character of the accused. You have used many great points but need to organize them into separate paragraphs and fill the paragraphs with specific details and elaboration. Of course try to commit to using formal language and even pick up some legal lingo by viewing some real life closing arguments on youtube. Best of luck!